English could use a bit of improvement, but overall really great video of a well done painting. The tips are useful.
English could use a bit of improvement, but overall really great video of a well done painting. The tips are useful.
Thanks for the comment, english its not my first leanguage so i always have problems when i write shit in my draws or video, thank you
That's a pretty humorous parody, though the ending was a bit...crappy :P Haha but in all seriousness, well done. Good animation and funny lyrics.
Thanks. Yeah, I'll be honest. I didn't want the ending to just cut to end credits.... and my go to solution was to have Naruto knock him out and defecate on his unconscious body for the lulz.... I wanted to release this asap so i wasn't thinking that straight... starting to regret it... oh well.
I'm guessing any cheesiness featured in this clip was intentional. Well, great work in any case
Oh we live on cheese! Cheezowie!
Congrats on Review Crew Pick :D Well deserved!
Thanks! and wow, review crew pick!
I'm sorry, but I didn't find the punchline original enough or innovated on in any way to be humorous. The animation was also rather choppy. You gave it a shot, though, and I have no doubt in my mind you'll be able to improve your future animations to run smoother and/or become funnier. You definitely have potential, you just need to work hard practicing your skills to tap into it.
Thanks for the review. :D
This is rather cliche, I certainly won't disagree with that. I made this a while ago, so my animation has improved since then.
For a while now, this has been my favorite my favorite series on NG, more than any other. To see it come to a conclusion is sad, but I know it's going to be epic.
This video in particular, while it was shorter than expected, serves as an excellent build up to the coming conclusion, and it has me really excited to see what's in store. Great animation and voice acting as always, and for a comedy series, was surprisingly great at building tension. Woo!
P.S. I borrowed a screencap from you for my avatar, if you don't mind. If you do, can I just name my first child "Fernando SexualLobster Manwhore"? Cheers ;D
glad you liked it.
Not bad. From a technical perspective, it's pretty polished. I thought the voice acting was pretty decent, too. I just didn't find it to be very funny. Not to say it wasn't entertaining (it somewhat was), just not comedic. Still, good job.
Thanks :P
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I love how you're taking all the comments and feedback in pace, and based on your responses, it seems like you have a good idea of what it is you're doing (or at least trying to do). However, I take it you can also see why you're receiving such low scores though.
It's fine though, just keep working at it and you'll improve. I don't think there's too much I can say that others haven't already said in other reviews, so I'll just end this by saying:
More animation, less exposition. Narration is fine, sure, but people want a story that's told through action. If you're gonna make a video that's lengthy (6+ minutes is lengthy by NG standards), then you gotta figure out how to capture and captivate your audience.
I'm just hoping that you guys and gals can hold on just a little bit longer. Later on my animations kick in and the story progresses like crazy. I know it may seem like it's a big risk I'm taking with what I'm doing now, but hey, it worked with my earlier fans before. If you guys and gals can just hold out a little bit longer, ya'll will see why I actually have a small number of diehard fans. I love all of ya'll and thanks for all of your comments.
Was totally expecting the robot to get homerunned with a baseball bat.
Me too...
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