00:00
00:00
CiviLies

115 Movie Reviews

11 w/ Responses

6 reviews are hidden due to your filters.

I'm surprised this has such a low score! Granted it IS pretty fucking nonsensical, it still looks pretty awesome, and it was kinda humorous, too (though it didn't really have me burst out laughing). Overall, I think it's pretty decent, especially with how great the actual animation is.

Though around the :31 or :32 second mark the blue robot turns almost black, like he's no longer being hit with a light source. It would make sense if it's because he's reflecting the TomCruiseBot, but his color is pink (even if his cock is black, still puzzling to me)

Anyway, like I said it's overall pretty decent! Keep it up.

Not bad. From a technical perspective, it's pretty polished. I thought the voice acting was pretty decent, too. I just didn't find it to be very funny. Not to say it wasn't entertaining (it somewhat was), just not comedic. Still, good job.

DarkStar7421 responds:

Thanks :P

Jay so bank
Jay so wank
Jay so skank
Jay so tank
Jay so dank

Completely saw this coming. Still worthy of a chuckle. I'm actually glad this was cut short, a drawn-out punchline just makes a joke fall apart. Animation is pretty decent and I actually thought the "Lol" at the end was a nice touch.

i cri everi tim

Fizzento responds:

;_;

This piece was clever and funny for how short it was. I wish it was longer, but it's still great.

I love how you're taking all the comments and feedback in pace, and based on your responses, it seems like you have a good idea of what it is you're doing (or at least trying to do). However, I take it you can also see why you're receiving such low scores though.

It's fine though, just keep working at it and you'll improve. I don't think there's too much I can say that others haven't already said in other reviews, so I'll just end this by saying:

More animation, less exposition. Narration is fine, sure, but people want a story that's told through action. If you're gonna make a video that's lengthy (6+ minutes is lengthy by NG standards), then you gotta figure out how to capture and captivate your audience.

stewardhklarlover responds:

I'm just hoping that you guys and gals can hold on just a little bit longer. Later on my animations kick in and the story progresses like crazy. I know it may seem like it's a big risk I'm taking with what I'm doing now, but hey, it worked with my earlier fans before. If you guys and gals can just hold out a little bit longer, ya'll will see why I actually have a small number of diehard fans. I love all of ya'll and thanks for all of your comments.

So short. So simple. So awesome. I loved it.

To see the world through the eyes of YurgenBurgen...

Funny and greatly animated, but I honestly thought that the voice acting was terrible. At least for Luigi. Mario and Bowser were pretty alright. Great lighting and shadows, with accommodating music.

Though I don't think the "and why" part of the question was answered...

Age 29, Male

Joined on 1/20/13

Level:
15
Exp Points:
2,390 / 2,500
Exp Rank:
24,550
Vote Power:
5.72 votes
Rank:
Police Officer
Global Rank:
16,644
Blams:
108
Saves:
484
B/P Bonus:
10%
Whistle:
Bronze
Medals:
140
Supporter:
1m 28d